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Beautiful Girl! In my Opinion... The composition of the bottom right of the frame does not justify the top left of the frame being left empty. Light is not sharp enough to add drama. You could have used a diffent tone of light from bottom right to illuminate the face and add intrest. Your Thoughts?

You are absolute right in some ways, e.g. light. Thanks for your opinion. I will try to realised that later. Thx again, DDD

I don't think I agree with the first comment - I like the space in upper L, and what I like most is the unconventional lighting where you've shown us the shadowed side of her face, creating a nice mystery. And the vertical lines in her sweater overlaid by horizontals, and the whites of her eyes... all the details work perfectly for me. The only thing I can think of is to do the same shot with different expressions - maybe this is the best, maybe something more pensive would be more alluring.

Great lighting, great shot.

 

Thanks for sharing:)

This is a very striking photograph. I see from other comments that some see room for improvement. I disagree! I think that this is a unique and compelling presentation. BRAVO!!