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Interesting composition and use of shadows, but I think you'd be better served with the right post darkened quite a bit, and the lower right corner as well. It would help emphisize the model and her pose more.

 

Alexis

 

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The right column fells too washed for me. Anyway, the composition rocks.

Good shot & shadows, but I agree with the others regarding the right column

I like the brightness on the right pillar, especially because it contrast so much with the rest of the image. It is an interesting variation on the old "crucifixion" motif without being too close to be blasphemic. good work!

I like it the way it is. Very good creativity and good motive.

As to form, I shall have to weigh in with the "the right post should be darkened" camp. As to content, human bondage is a good subject. As much as we struggle to be free, we are bound to the body and its brute laws.

very good

Both stunning and evocative.... chris

wish the wooden post wasn't washed out. good picture otherwise.

doomed.