reighamsyde 0 Posted December 11, 2005 added one of my skys to give this image of the beach a boost Link to comment
michael_smith21 0 Posted December 11, 2005 very effective use of photoshop - a good match. I like the way the clouds & the first part of breaker come together Link to comment
dave_holland 0 Posted December 11, 2005 Memories of the smell of rotting seaweed, and the warm sounds of the ocean beach, come back strong on this one, Kevin. Yeah, the sky adds something. I might have cropped a little off the left hand edge, to move the central netting to the 1/3 mark. Cheers. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted December 11, 2005 Kevin, interesting rendition,very good DOF that leads you eye inside. I second the suggestion of a bit cropping the Lhs. in order to bring closer the nets. very nice. Pnina Link to comment
wayne_willis2 0 Posted December 12, 2005 awesome composition with strong subject matter and a great sky Link to comment
mark_jordan3 0 Posted December 12, 2005 Great decision on adding the sky...the added oblique lines make this a wonderfully dynamic composition. My only hesitation is the contrail...perhaps too parallel to the horizon IMO. Nice work! Link to comment
ciprian 0 Posted December 13, 2005 Awesome,the composition and the tones are great. Ciprian. Link to comment
cavagna ottavio 0 Posted December 18, 2005 bellissima .... ottima prospettiva e foto...complimenti Link to comment
rjacksonphoto 0 Posted September 30, 2008 Nice shot but I wish the contrail were not there. Also, raising the camera position slightly would have afforded a better view of the ocean and prevented the horizon from intersecting the posts. Also, might have positioned the large post in the foreground a little more to the left. This would have placed it in the sweet spot according to the rule of thirds, eliminating the dead space in the lower left corner. Also would have moved it away from the confluence of clouds, which right now lies behind the post... Tonal scale is good and an excellent choice of subject. Link to comment
yannik_hay 1 Posted September 30, 2008 Very nice beach image and I learned by reading R Jackson's comment. For my tastel, I would contrast a bit the image. Well done! Link to comment
beaz 0 Posted September 30, 2008 I like the shot, especially the expanse of sky, contrail and all. I also like the square format and would personally keep that. The shadow contrast seems a little light on this side of the barrier, like maybe it was dodged a bit? Could do a selective levels adjustment if you were so inclined. That said, it is still a solid image as is and I suspect it would make a lovely B&W print. Regards, Jerry Link to comment
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