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composition is very bad. consider cropping right to match left more. flatten tones in back and possibly defocu s bit. desaturate the red as it distracts from the face. be more daring with your lighting. dim right shoulder of left model to match other model

I aggree with dim sholder. but leave red and bring the color of her eye's out. posabily enlarge eyes?

Don't pay too much attention to comments on your lighting. You have built a nice picture with great impact. Keep it up. Good work!

I don't understand the "bad" comments on this.. even though it's not the "style" that I usually like.

 

I think it's a great piece of creative photography, and worthy of top ratings. Of course, the way this site is going, you would have gotten STELLAR ratings had she been nude, ya know.. ;o)That's unfortunate.

 

This is VERY creative, well composed.. and the light draws you into her eyes and face... ignore the less than great comments, imho.

 

Well done!

 

jb

This is a beautiful shot. I wouldn't change a thing. Perfect DOF, great lighting, dramatic pose. She looks like a fantasy magazine character. Very nice photo as usual, Dima!

Best regards from Kenya,

Mark