birds Eyes ahead!

Please critique. If you give a score of less than 4, please say why.

Constructive critiques always welcome. It is not helpful if you score

low, and do not give a reason. Please help me improve.

Finally, please see my portfolio

 

Thanks!

 

Yinka

Good catch here. I like the diagonal, but too bad the third bird wasn't feeling like cooperating with you =)

Actually I was happy that the bird looked back. It was almost like it was stealing a peak, which made the title "Eyes ahead" more apt.

 

Thanks for the comments

Yinka, This is awesome. I actually like the fact that the third bird was looking back. It gives it humour. Is it my monitor or is the first bird just a bit out of focus? I don't usually give too much value to originality, but I can truly say that this is original. Nicely composed I might add.

You are right; the leading bird is slightly out of focus. This was done with a telephoto to blur the background, and also cropped from a larger image.

 

Thanks for the comment

 

Yinka