Stairway to...

Comments welcome.

I like the perspective. It looks like you're shooting straight down, yet the background appears to be the sky. You could fool around with different framing, but the only technical thing that struck me immediately was the gray sky which looks dull. I'd lighten it up a bit.

I take it this is some kind of scultpure, it appears daliesque in form - judgeing by how the bird is perched anyhow. I like it.

The graphic of this image is interesting, however I think that it could be better with a different post-processing (photoshop traitement): more B&W contrasted, I find the image a little too gray. And, with my opinion, the presence of the bird is not necessary.

 

With a better light, It would be perfect.

Original composition.

You have a great eye for the graphically interesting composition. The bird really ads a nice touch here. I like the fact that the subject seems to be floating in space and not "grounded".

Claude, I don't think that the sky is an issue here, it is a very good graphical composition, like a suspended statue in the air.very nice color range from black to white and grays in the middle. Pnina

Pnina, I think he changed it right after my comment.

Carl, I did not see it before, so I have commented on the current version.If your comment helped , better still, as it is good imo as it is now.

Yes, Carl, I found that your suggestion was appropriate and I made a correction. I should have mentioned it.

You're welcome.

Very nice image. I find the bird adds to this in an interesting way. It seems royal as it sits perched on this sophisticated stairway.