Efca II.

thanx

Two tone background a little distracting. Overexposed at least one stop. Soft side lighting, from say an open window, would have added texture, dimension and a little mystery. Staring at the camera is too 'posed'. Maybe glancing shyly down.

It does not look overexposed on my calibrated monitor; high key maybe.

Beautiful model, good eye contact and detail. Lighting is good, perhaps slightly overesposed but that may just be personal taste. Head fling or fan?

I approve of the complementary colours breaking the background into 1/3-2/3's this also gives a touch of colour without disturbing the portrait. The high key portrait is well composed and thought provoking in how it reveals and attempts to conceal. The image is very well designed and deceptively complex.

Perhaps the left side of her face is slightly overexposed but I think that it works well here. I also like expression that you were able to capture. Well done!

 

Absolutely gorgeous

Fantastic... it seems that her face come off the screen.