Otherworldly

What works and what doesn't in this abstract?

 

Your comments and criticism is most appreciated!

 

Thanks!

Interesting texture and great use of light!

Neat long shadows. Interesting play on light.

Probably the weakness of this photo is that there aren't any large shapes that are particularly interesting. The strength then is that the shadows and smaller shapes create a 3D effect. We scan the shadows and shapes for a sense of scale. Sometimes finding the true size and then losing it again as the eye wanders.

On my opinion, the black corner at the bottom right cuts the effect. If you had only the shadow diagonals and every else sunny... I thing it will be better. But it's a great picture anyway!