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Please Critique

The luminous focus is on her face but the part of the image that seems most 'in focus' is her bust line...otherwise nice!

I do like the mood of this picture but find the vignetting a little distracting.

I like the composition, the pose, the blur, and the vignetting here. I'd propose to clone of the strap hanging near the neck as well as the black thing at her wrist. And finally I may try to create a sepia-toned layer at low opacity (20-40%) and overlap it with this in order to get an older colors look.

 

Just a note besides this: I saw that the folders of which I'd be most interested visiting next are "Works" and "Vintage". Vintage is probably the best (in my humble opinion of course), but Works, despite what I'd call some exagerated post-production treatments, has some pictures with strong potential, I think.

 

Best regards and thanks for the constructive comments on the site.