Studio XI (Model: Amber G)

This is a retry. Thanks in advance.

 

Special thanks go to those who made kind comments on the previous

version. :D

amazing!

7 7

Wonderful lighting and composition. Nice skin tones but I would darken her left chest wall a bit. Nicely done, Ray!

Beautiful lighting and composition. I might dodge the right arm to the up to the sholder a bit and burn down the the fore arm ever so slightly so the focus remains on the face and the arm does not look detached.

7/7

oh, wonderful and so beautiful.

Top Classic B&W!

Biliana

Super composition Ray

7/7

Beautiful image.

so nice, so beautiful....

Great lighting matched with beauty and poise!

Beautiful expression, grace and beauty. I like the negative space on the right.

I am impressed with the technique, composition and light! Great work!

Just love that girl! Beautiful in every way!

Great composition and light!

 

Regards, Carlo.

Excellent, but where is the model credit ? This looks to me like Amber G. I always try to credit the models I work with as well as the photographers. I'm sure this is just an oversight. If it is Amber, it's probably one of the best images I've seen done of her. Great work.

love it

Outstanding lightning, B&W and pose.

Esteve

Kevin, thanks. Yes this is Amber G. I'll attach her name next to the photo next time.

Awesome shot! Her pose/expression does alot here.. credit to her! Her look/expression here is timeless. I like that her right arm (from her side) is brighter since it gives a feeling that someone else is hugging her.. or that she wants love from someone but cant get it for some reason. Lots of stories in this shot. Very good shot! Congrats! =)

 

Regards,

 

Patrick J

You could get a 2nd great shot from the upper-left corner

wonderfull wonderfull wonderfull!!!

Great face and pose.

The tonal balance is not perfect but with this model and your skills? I think you can reach the "TOP"

Great pose. What I don't like so much is the plastic-fantastic look of her skin, with no skin texture. Also, there's slight evidence of posterization on the models right shoulder, probably as a result of dodging in the shadows. The D2X doesn't have much leeway in shadow-areas, because of the limited dynamic range here.