inside & outside

Do you like this old house.

Feel free viewing the larger version but don't go upstairs......

Thanks for visiting.

I love this! Your eye is drawn immediately to the far window because of the light and color. It has such a meloncholy feeling attached to it, it is brilliant!!

I like the greens in the image. There are strong connections between the green grass, the green wood trim, and the green vegetation seen through the rear window. I think that the green in the rear window, through the doorway, is a splendid focal point.

 

The light coming through the window in the upper storey is perhaps too strong a counterpoint, both in brightness and colour. The primary blue in the sky creates a strong colour clash with the greens. The brightness draws the eye away from the more subtle details in the window frame just below it. I have tried a crop, retaining the square composition. See what you think can be done by removing the top window and the sky.

At first, thanks for your comment George.

Yes, I think you be right about your suggestions but I like to show you all, also the bird's home at the left.

Sharon, thanks for your comment!

good intention but the colours are a litle flat and the small window in the upper right part is not good for the composition ... best regards

and such a beautiful picture Wim! I love this kind of compositions. Where can I find this spooky house? Or is it already demolished?

 

Like Sharon said it radiates feelings of melancholy; memories to a better past. You've captured this scene very well, Wim. Through the angle you choose there is so much to see of the interior of the house. I like the view to the window with the yellow panes and in particular the view to the stairwell. I think that detail could be a beautiful picture in itself.

 

It's such a kind of a shot that invites to get worked up in PS to make it even more dramatic than it already is. Do you feel the hint Wim?;~)

 

However, a fantastic and very interesting picture. I secretly hope that you have taken more shots inside of the house...

ottima composizione con colori fantastici! Triste e suggestiva. Bravisimo! Ciao

Love the subject. But I agree about cropping tighter to remove the small top window. The eye keeps going there due to it's brightness

Wim, desolation captured in a beautiful way. Excellent composition: whatever direction you look, it's crooked and yet with a dignity in its touches of green. I read the suggestions about cropping out the samll window. I'd keep it; it's the kiss of the sky--and then you'll do what you prefer:-)

Great shot Wim, about the top right window I would not crop it, but I might burn in there to make it less bright. Great picture you have a good eye.

 

DK.

Excellent texture, tones and framing.

The title is very good too.

Very good done!

Mooie foto, precies op de juiste plaats genomen.

(bedankt Wim voor je bemoedigende "commentaar" op mijn duiven)

Ellen.

Thanks all again for the comments....What you see above is a compilation of this three photo's.

 

You're such a riot* Wim, but a very sweet one! Really very great job you did here dear brother:~) This deserves an adjusment. I gonna change the ratings, if I'm allowed to.....

;) with a big hug from your sister!

 

 

I though it was real, it seems real...

Matrix complex....

Very good work you did in PS, amazing!