Wedding #2

Off my first wedding.I managed to get this in before the rain

started in again.Welcome comments and suggestions.

nice skin tones but the dress and suit have no detail at all on my monitor...

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Thanks for the comments,on some monitors I have noticed that it is that way.On some it looks fine to me.

It looks overexposed - the dress is completely washed out and without detail.

Well then why dont you offer some advice then...so negative here sometimes.I dont mind criticism but it is nice if you put in some input..thanks.

Hi Joe. Have you tried using the burn tool to get a bit more detail into the dress? Also, I wish you hadn't cropped out the groom's feet and the bride's gown ;) I reckon there's a bit too much space above their heads. Tilting the camera down or basically getting a lower camera angle could have solved both these issues.

In addition, I'm not sure how much space you had to 'play with,' but the bush behind them doesn't do justice to the groom, because his suit is dark as well. Maybe changing their location or your angle so that only the sea is behind them could have made for a better backdrop. The setting is nice though.

Finally, I'd crop out those two yellow 'markers' at the edges of the frames...

Best regards from Kenya,

Mark :]