High key?

My first attempt at a high-key portrait. I am mainly looking for

constructive comments rather than just ratings, but feel free to do

both :)

I am not specialised in this technique but to me, this shot looks more overexposed than high-key... Basically, you should whiten everything more, then punch up the blacks, not the greys- as it is, there are actually too many details. Also, before you do all that, you should try and bring out some details in her lower lips and teeth. Good efort, though!

Hi S :) Thanks for the critique. I'm going to try it out, but I'm not sure how exactly to go about it in PS. Pls email me how you'd do it, when you get some time... I'll try it out on my own in the meantime. Cheers!

Too hot in the cheeks. Its fine on frame left but the right cheek looks kinds wierd. Nice shot though!