Hard job to eat a cookie!

Thank you for your time!!

Sorry to be blunt but for me the composition leaves something to be desired. It's a bit hard to see what's going on in this picture at first sight, so I think it lacks impact.

Katie: I entirely disagree. -- I think that it can be very interesting to work out what's going on in a photo slowly.

I would say, though, that the dots of light make the poor man look like he's been sprinkled with glitter. Could his hair and the cookie be the lightest parts of the photo? This would improve it in my view.

Also, consider cropping out the bottom eighth or so of the image. (Katie wouldn't like this!)

Overall, not a bad effort at all.

Katie has an eye prollem & Jonathan talks too much! Hell, it's really just a well done photo! Kudos!