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Neat!

Nice lines, cute model. I think it needs more light in the foreground, so much light in the background is hard on the eyes

I like the idea of this photograph very much. However, I think it would be better if all the verticals were vertical and all the horizontals were horizontal. This is a very difficult thing to achieve and you would probably need a very expensive lens to get it close to being correct!

Very nice motif and composition.

I like the sensuality this photo has. The background is a bit 'caged' and creates tension. I am sure that this pose would create an entire different effect if she stood in front of a simple backbround or inside a natural setting.

Very nice photo. I agree that squaring the lines more would make the image stronger, as would a little more light on the figure, but overall the lighting effect and geometry are great.

Overall I like it. As far as lighting the model I would either go darker so she's just curves contrasting the lines or a tiny bit lighter for more detail. She looks very attractive so I'd probably say lighter but it depends on what mood you were going for. Nice work.