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This is better then the other ones you have taken of her. Lovely colors, traditional composition, perfect work. Could be more spontaneous.

Very basic stuff, but with radiant beauty... it somehow

works. Comments, pls!

I think this will be extremely good shot in her portfolio despite having a classic portrait light instead of the cliche symmetric fashion light (clam light). Looks genuine enough. Good hair shot although contrast is very much on the limit. What about a necklace? Good to see you copyright your shots.

Lovely lighting. Large main and fill by looking at the catch lights. It sculpts her face perfectly. Very traditional but it works! Straight on view is often not as flattering, but her personality beams straight out at you.

thanks guys! Excellent observations.

very nice, simply but atractive 6/6

Beautiful model and well done work ! Regards ! 7/7

centered=less drama/boring. Great smile. lighting is good. lil bit too much chest blank space