lakenheath Break

F15 eagle in a hard break to join the landing pattern at RAF

Lakenheath

Cool, but you ask for a critique... Well, neither plane is centered in the frame, and/or worse, one plane is cut in half. It would have worked better to either have both planes fully in the frame or only the banking one. Having both planes would be nice for experiencing the moment, since you'd be able to see that one plane was doing something radically different.

 

You caught a great moment though - the bank, wingtip trail. At 400mm, you were probably glad that the plane was even in the frame... Your image has good clarity, which is of course critical for this.

I would crop this vertically to include only the plane on the left. I think this will make a much more striking image. Also, the picture looks a bit light on my screen.