Stop to smell the flowers

Say hello to my little friend Serah.She graciously allowed me to try

out some shots on her using multiple flashes.This was my first

attempt at that technique,I used a sb28 as a main and a sb50 as a

wireless slave.Any comments or advice are welcome.

I LIKE THE YELLOW REFLECTION ON HER FACE AND POSITIONING.FOR ME I WOULD LIKE TO SEE IT A LITTLE SHARPER AND JUST A TOUCH DARKER