Moondrops, 100%

Attempt from my second day of street shooting--constructive

critiques appreciated.

Robert: I'm only going to say this because I'm 100% guilty of this myself. I think this would stronger if the faces were more evident. The half turned face of the guy in shades isn't quite enough to hold my interest, and there's little sense of tension in what he's doing. Best, Jeremy

Jeremy, I think your critique is quite right--and the picture would be much better if his face was turned. Thanks . . . I'll keep this in mind as I attempt more of these.

interestin capture 5/5