A slow leak.

by Szulecki Joshua

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Gallery: Waterfalls and Flowing Water

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Nature

Published: Thursday 14th of July 2005 08:54:01 PM


Joshua Szulecki
Brightness... Mark, I agree the image is too dark, I didn't notice it on my laptop, which has an extremely bright lcd. I quickly adjusted the image, and while it isn't great looking, it looks better than it did. Going to go back and see if I bracketed this one or not...

Mark Geistweite
Too Dark Compositionally good and a peaceful scene indeed. I would like to see this brighter by at least a stop. That,I believe, would give the water a silkier appearance and bring out more detail in the rocks. Hope this is helpful.

Joshua Szulecki
bracket. I didn't.

Joshua Szulecki
A slow day, a slow leak. The day had become dull, so I headed out to Cascade Falls in Patapsco State Park. I am glad I did, because after last night's rainfall the falls was flowing quite well for this time of year. This picture is of a very small corner "rivulet?" on the right side of the falls. I like the way the leaves look, but also the way they conspire with the dark rock and water to create a "cool" scene, despite the hot and humid day on which the picture was actually taken. I like the picture, but there is always room for improvement, so your suggestions are very welcome.

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