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Time for large generator repair (RH,BIH,YU:"Mjesec remonta")

Looking through a _________ at the moon? Interesting.

Originality - 7. Composition--use of the Rule of Thirds is excellent. Repeated pattern and parallel lines are great. Lighting and saturation on the natural framing for the moon is ver good...even the tint of the moon inside the tube. Too badk the bright side of the moo is washed out. Tough judgment call for you. Looks like you took the best option. The only other thing, would have been to take two exposures. The one you have here and then one for the moon and then paste the properly exposed moon in where this one is. (Just some thoughts.) 7-Originality, 6-Aesthetics. Regards. (Haven't seen other work. This is in the string of "Rate Recent Photos.")

 

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PS: I tried the last idea and failed getting the same effect on the moon, but have plenty of detail. Check out attached image to see what you think.

For me this is a great picture but spoilt by the bright light at the end of the core. I'm spending more time wondering what it is, rather than appreciating to rest of the picture. Regards - Paul Chilton

The title "Mjesec remonta" works really well for this picture :)