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Edale, the English countryside


markonestudios

ISO 200 coulour negative film.


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I liked the way the branches on the sides of the photo provided a

natural frame to the landscape in the background.

 

What do you think of it?

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Hi Pavel! I am truly honoured by your comments. I've seen your work...very nice! Thanks a lot for looking at mine. I'm very much a novice/beginner, so it's really encouraging to get comments from seasoned photographers like yourself :)
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Hello Mark

 

You have a nicely done landscape here: composition is good the frame within the frame also. But doing so you have a dark foreground. Maybe you have more details in the foreground with your original file? Or try to get more with photoshop? Here is an example I have exagerated it so you can see what I want to show you. Brightening the ground and leafs and darkening clouds and the sky.

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Hi! Thanks for your comments. I think I do actually have more detail, I tried to darken the foreground perhaps a little too much to draw more attention to the landscape in the background. But I'll definitely try out what you suggest.

Thanks a lot. I appreciate your taking the time to look :)

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Nice framing. Leads the viewer nicely to the house and the background. I like that the house is off to one side, thus not intruding on the background.

Congrats,

Kelvin.

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The dark foreground is excellent for balance of light and dark. Pity the sun didnt strike more of the house, especially the white window frames, then to be contrasted against the dark wood? Thatit would have been much more dramatic. Maybe at another hour?? Now the main subject is the well-framed hill and country-side. If one blanks off the rather gloomy half-house, the remaining material becomes more strict in composition.
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