At Work..

Nathan,

It evokes a good mood that is representive of India, but there is room for some improvement.

It has a bit of a washed out look, which I think is a result of the scanning. Try re-scanning it to see if it improves.

The woman's face is completely lost in the shadows. Without resorting to an elaborate multi-flash system, I'm not sure what you could do about this. Maybe try the shadow/highlight tool in PS CS(2).

The leaves in the foreground are somewhat distracting - they completely hide the man's hands.

Plenty of potential here, just needs a little more work/thought.

Hope this helps.

Thanks Craig..Appreciate ur comments..

I agree with scanning...if u see the prints, u might like it.

i want to show the girl face in darkness only b'se of her lifestyle...

but i value ur comments..

Donatas,

Appreciate ur comments

Nathan,

I hadn't thought of purposely leaving the girls face shadowed. Now that concept certainly invokes a typical part of life for many Indian women. In that case - great thinking.