pnital 36 Posted May 26, 2005 Photographed in Japan. Harmony with a hint of human presence. Please comment your thoughts.Thanks Link to comment
rw 0 Posted May 26, 2005 Nicely done !! I like your layering technique. Personally, I would crop off the buiding on the top-right corner. Thanks for sharing. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted May 26, 2005 Thank you for taking the time to comment, About the building I thought about cloning it or not, for the time being i leave it and see what other visitors think as well, I may do it at the end... Pnina Link to comment
watermark_of_merni 14 Posted May 26, 2005 What I find so impressive is the top V portion of the tree, the angle is the same as the rivers direction. The details of color reflecting in the water are so beautiful and accurately exposed. Then the trees textured bark and willowy branches are lovely and this makes an excellent harmony . I would love to climb this tree and jump in this beautiful river for a swim. - Merni Link to comment
paula grenside 0 Posted May 26, 2005 Hi Pnina, harmonious in title and composition; excellent perspective and colors. I,too, wouldd crop out the building. Link to comment
aepelbacher 0 Posted May 26, 2005 I really like the previous comment ... I hadn't noticed the angle of river/tree. I like the depth of perspective that you have here. Nice! Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted May 26, 2005 Alec, and Lou Ann for your comments, Merni, for your nice interpretation Paula, as well, I have cloned the sign of human presence up there.... Thanks to all of you. Pnina Link to comment
alexandra rauh 0 Posted May 26, 2005 Really enchanting,the waterplay arround the curb,the modest tree,and of coarse,the light on the water. ( Wy I could'nt rate it,i don't know?) Link to comment
germainclaude 0 Posted May 26, 2005 The title is very well chosen. I see harmony in the colors, in the composition as well as in the object represented. Very effective! Link to comment
amalsircar 2 Posted May 27, 2005 Superb image for composition,colours,light,texture,frame and caption,Pnina. I would like to sit here for hours and marvel at the beauty of Nature.:-) Link to comment
carsten_ranke 0 Posted May 27, 2005 Very good diagonal composition, you shoot with an artist`s eye. Funny your announcement of human presence, that was cloned out then ;-). But I discovered another, even more tiny, hint of human presence: in the upper third there have been two branches trimmed, right ? Noticed that only because I didn`t see any traces of human presence... Link to comment
mari_mar 0 Posted May 27, 2005 Very well done, I love it! thanks for your comments, Pnina. :) Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted May 28, 2005 Alix, Claude, Amal. Catsten and Mari, I appreciate your comments very much! Carsten, I put back the one with a human hints... that I have cloned out. Pnina Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted May 29, 2005 I like it better without the building - it fits more with the title, imo. This looks like the type of scene you just come across in the middle of nowhere and the building takes away from the pleasant feeling you get from that idea. Link to comment
david robinson 0 Posted May 29, 2005 Pnina, your composition here works very well with this tree starting in the lower right and spreading its way through the diagonal axis till it fills the upper regions of this frame. The mood you captured is indeed harmonious with your balanced composition... Link to comment
wilsontsoi 0 Posted May 29, 2005 Pnina, I like the muted color pallette and the contrast between the dead tree branches against the bright, reflective body of water. BTW, the top right & left clone job needs a bit more tweaking, I think (the, "pattern" appearance gives it away.) All in all, very nice mood. ^_^ Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted May 30, 2005 A very nice gentle scene. I too like the muted colors. I agree that the cloning, especially in the upper left, needs just a little more attention (but not much) Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted May 30, 2005 Thanks to all of you for your nice comments, points of view , and suggestions, that I will profit from. Pnina Link to comment
schneekranich 0 Posted May 30, 2005 thanks for providing the previous version, too, I agree with the above to clone it away and am going to sit next to AKA marvelling. I like this "branches against water" and you did a real good exposure-job. Link to comment
jeremy freeland 0 Posted May 31, 2005 I agree with David Robinson that the angles set by the tree help make the shot. For this reason, I prefer the cloned version, because the right most branch leads nicely out of the top of the image, but gets interupted in the un-cloned version. Light reflections and the blues in the mid-foreground are also great. I like how the pale blues in the water work with the pale pinks of the glistening tree bark. Best, Jeremy. Link to comment
pnital 36 Posted May 31, 2005 Thank you Andrea for your comment and liking. Thank you Ken as well. Jeremy,(It is always my pleasure to read your detailed impressions, thanks) and all of you, I accept the majority point of view expressed here. and I will keep the cloned version. Link to comment
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