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Avril Lavigne


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© ? Neil Lupin 2005, no reproduction for any purpose

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Please critique! For those of you who routinely rate 1's 2's and 3's,

please leave a comment or its a waste of my time and your's!!

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Even though her face is clearly shaded, her expression is rather penetrating and really evokes a strong emotion.
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Neil! It's excellent! Don't you know it?

(do something with the white thick lines under the singer's hair)

7/7

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I like the shot. However, I think it would be better with just a little more room on the left. It kind of look strange the way it is now with more space on her back than on her front, mainly because of the position of her lower body. Also, a little more light in her face would help, but the hairs would maybe become too much distracting.
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In my opinion it is cropped to much in front of the girl. There should be more space there in order to keep the composition solid. Maybe you should consider wide "landscape" format instead. It is a pitty, because it is a very dramatic and emitional moment, though.
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