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eyes

This is a nice portrait. It seems a little overexposed on the right side of her face. Nice DOF.

This is a nice portrait (very nice). Her expression and her smile make it a very good photo. I can see only two points for critique, one is the overexposure of the left part (as Amar commented) and the other is the cadre which is not good (her head should be on the right side). Maybe you should crop to a square format and have her face centered. You can try it to see if you like it more.....

well though technically both amar and vasilis are correct abt over exposure and composition, this pic works for me just fine. her gentle smile and dreamy gaze paints a nice story which overcomes the technical points....great shot parvin. excellent tonal range. my compliments.

The overexposure works for me. Her eyes are sharply defined, yet the light gives a soft touch to her hair and skin. The grain goes well too. Beautiful!