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I think it is good. I love the hot spot on her jeans melting in with the shutters. I think this would be better if we could not see the edge of the shutters.

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Good stuff: She's very attractive, the pose is good, and the correspondence between the metal accessories and the metal door makes this composition work well.

Bad stuff: Shadows are very harsh (consider a reflector or fill-flash to relieve them and light her face better), the black space at far right should be cropped, and the shell jewelry clashes with all the metal (a fashion detail, but this is in the fashion category).

Bottom line - Promising; hope you keep at it.

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Not exactly the most origional pose in the world - but I do like the way that the colors on the woman can be found in the background - it all seems to go together well.
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Frankly, far below your usual standard. Dont't forget that it always starts from the face. The face is underlit and thus tones and geometry suffer. A bit more fill light.
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thats one really hot model! i kinda like the light too, its intense. i agree with David's crop, without the dark strip in the right, its better.
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