Soyara

I think it would have been better if you had used some fill on the dark side of her face. I also think its not in proper balance. The way you have her head positioned in the upper right hand seems a bit awkward. A more traditional framing might not be as original but it would be more aesthically pleasing IMHO.

All that said she is an attractive model and the photo is nice and sharp. The background is inobtrusive and does not steal attention from the lady. Overall I give this a 5/5