band portraits Eyesclosed - Band Portrait

What could I have done better with this location for this band photo?

Very creative, 6/6

For web publishing you might want a tighter crop or different contrast. Printed large what's going on is probably clear, but small sized it takes a bit of concentration.

Black turtle necks (head only) and tighter crop. Excellant work here.

tighter crop here you cannot tell who they are.

Reading the technical details I understand you wanted lots of space to add the CD info. However, I guess the advise of the long turtlenecks is a good one.

 

How did you chose who to show with one eye out, who with the other and who whitout eyes seen? Given the name of the band it might have been interested to show -indeed- no eyes or put everyone with the eyes behind bars...

 

...and, did I mention the idea is terrific?

It's a great idea/concept and well done - congrats for that. I just can double what is said before: I preffered to see at least one eye per person (male on the right). and just for the web a thigther crop- since it's too hard to see anything.

Fantastic shot

Second the crop. But I'd go easy on it, because the gestalt is nice.

 

On the shirts, I'd keep them consistent length. One looks like a turtle neck. Not a big deal. Wouldn't thought of that myself, but since someone mentioned it....

 

Nice job. Very cool.