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Another in the lens test for the new tamron 28-75/2.8

used a gnd filter on the sky and vivatar 283 for fill flash.

Cropping seems weird print took a couple of incles off the top

Any thoughts appreciated

It's a cute shot. Here's an idea for cropping. Their being on the side seems good to me. Might darken the sky a bit. Wonderful expressions.

Very pleasing double portrait!

 

Regards, Nick.

Nice picture. Cute girls. I like the crop Graham showed better. Yours has a little too much sky for my preference...other than that, no complaints! I love the girls off to the side. Their mama will be proud, I'm sure!

The subject matter is super, I like the crop with the horizon on the top third. I saw your other one and I liked the subject too, but the light is off. The fill flash ? took away all the contours of their faces so they look kind of flat. Plus it seems to lack contrast. Hope you don't mind, I played in PS, cloned the stem up by the tallest, cropped, dodged and burned a little and added a slight blur. They are adorable!

Jayme's crop is better.