poster shot

please critique

You missed a great opportunity, here, John. Should have included a perfectly racked set of balls, and the caption would have read: "Nice Rack"

 

Pardon my insensitivity. I'm feeling a little politically incorrect just now.

Fantastic Lighting!!! Looks great, I might try to tone down the steel? rail on the table but man! you did a great job here

6o/7a

Great lighting, model & pose. If I wanted to really nitpick I would suggest brightening the whites of the models eyes a little (and boy, does she have a lovely pair of eyes). Well done.

Good job, John. Very poster-ish.

I like your web page. Your work is very mature, shows a lot of polish, but holy cow, you look like a college kid!

 

Hmmm, I still think you should have added the balls here. Can't believe no one agrees with me, yet.

Definitely poster-ish (the subject takes care of that.) The backlight is a nice touch. The "Rockstar" could be toned down. The picture is soft for a D1x, and I see aliasing on the railing.

Thanks for all of the comments thus far. The softness is from softening the shot to hide some skin issues. Doug, that pic is from about 5 years ago, I was 32 or 33! Thanks though, I've been feeling pretty old lately, 38th B-day coming in a few weeks!

I love colors in this image. Great!