Regatta Splashes

I really hope you don't take this the wrong way, I've never done this before, there are parts of this shot I really like >> see attachment.

Or am I being too outrageous?

Thanks Rob for your vision on the shot.I just discovered your picture. But I am afraid I just can't make the sail thᴠsmall. Maybe because of losing the "wind / sail effect"? You like rowing?:) I do like the red correction..Kind regards Emily

What do you think? Thanks for taking a look