boris_forever 0 Posted March 10, 2005 There is no way but greatness for this picture! Great colors and shapes. Maybe something different may be attained by experimenting with a tigher crop. Link to comment
minicucci 0 Posted March 10, 2005 Claude; IMO, this is a color and shape composition that works. The snow is blown out but I think that actually adds to the composition. Very nice. A couple of quick points for your consideration on finishing: 1. there is a slight tilt to the left that should be corrected; 2. there is a slight blue cast in the "white" area of the sign; 3. I think it would add some subtle texture impact to lighten/add contrast to the inside of the window and the painted brick wall surface. A quick example is attached. Link to comment
apotheker 0 Posted March 10, 2005 Strong composition and color, a nice capture. I appreciated, and agree with Patricia's comments and suggestions for corrections. IMO. I think the green of the wall was an important component (an opposite of red), and strengthens the image. If changes were made I would seriously take this into consideration. Link to comment
germainclaude 0 Posted March 10, 2005 Thank you all for your comments. I still have a lot to learn and these are good lessons. Link to comment
sampsonphoto 0 Posted March 12, 2005 I love the composition, I think the crop is fine as is. I love it when I see shots of everyday things placed so well together in a frame, and you have done just that. Cheers Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 14, 2005 fascinating work! great colour contrast, and a wonderful composition. Link to comment
drybrain 0 Posted March 15, 2005 bold, clean, crisp graphics. very good. looks like a residence of K. Malevich fan. Link to comment
cityshapes 0 Posted April 2, 2005 wonderful colorful portfolio - this one especially caught my eye. Link to comment
kentb2 0 Posted April 17, 2006 Really there is nothing to add except I so much enjoy your work and your keen sensitivity to composition and color. Link to comment
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