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What do you think of this picture ?

Excellent portrait, lighting and expression. But I don't like the (too) blurred hand (and the two little white scratches but it's only a detail!)

Imho a great expresive portrait. The better work in this class (6/6)

I like the composition, the light and the tone of the photo. However, I find that the focus is not at the right place at all to pass any kind of emotion. I would also clone out the white 2 white spots on the top (left and right), plus the one on his colar, and finally the scratch on his elbow. This would remove some distractions but would makes the viewer focus more on the fact that the focus is not at the right place, at least in my opinion.

Lionel,from the 3 uploads That is a nice one, I like the soft light on his face the angle,and his smile.The light on his shirt is a bit washed out. I don't know what is he doing with his hands, maybe if the lower hand was croped a little higher. anyway all that said I like it.

Pnina

Lionel, this is a very nice moment captured. Pity that the face is not entirely in focus, but even so, there's a lot of mood in this picture.

 

Let me guess, you are Canadian? Forgive me if I am wrong, and please let me know if I am right :)

 

I was impressed by the number of comments you made to my pictures and portfolio in general - THANK YOU. I am glad I manage to leave a thought behind, that's great. I am learning!

 

Kind regards, have a lovely day

 

Vi