Museo del Louvre

Museo del Louvre

Your idea here is funny, and it captures something specific about the way tourists experience museums. However, the photo does come across as flat and grainy. It could be a combination of the film choice and aperture setting (I think I'd like it more with finer grain and less DOF). But more likely I think it's the high angle and the rail in the foreground that make this photo keep the viewer at a certain distance.