robertbrown 1 Posted March 2, 2005 Comment, ratings appreciated on semi-abstract b&w. Thanks. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 2, 2005 Bob, I just submitted a silly cat photo for critique and thought I'd take a look at the critique forum. This one caught my eye immediately! The shadows, horizontal bands, textures, tonal range, etc. are terrific. I think what makes this one for me is the way the broader shadow bends about 2/3 down the frame. I don't think anything needs to be done to improve this. However, if you were bored, you might consider lightening the links on the chain in the forground shadow (just a little dodging perhaps). Good eye! Link to comment
robertbrown 1 Posted March 5, 2005 Laurie, thanks for your comment. You are certainly right about dodging the bottom chain a bit. While the light here is just about perfect for a black and white photo, I'm not entirely happy with the composition. In the end, there may be too much going on. Link to comment
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