Senior Portrait

Please Critique..

Picture is bit over saturated .. ir

Image could be improved if the large hotspots on her forehead and arm were removed.

All hot spots and kicks deliberate.

I like the way you have post-processed this... and I personally could cope with even a touch more saturation in the periphery of the image! The burnt-out areas add to the impact. I don't think it fits with the other work in your 'Works' folder (which I also like) though... as it's a very different style. Best wishes.

i'm really surprised this isn't getting much higher ratings. its an original style portrait. sure, it isn't the best photo i've ever seen, but its better than most. nice balance to the shot with grafiti on both sides of the girl. nice post processing work, although i might have done something with the forground plants. really nice shot...

The girl becomes part of the graffiti.

Fantastic concept and execution. This senior portrait has style! It says "big city high school" to me.

I wish I had a senior portrait like this. Mine was so stiff and generic. I like the post and the background; they tell me alot about this young lady.