Veiled

comments are wellcome, thanks

I would like to see you subject fully in the frame....definitely not centered. I don't like it that the right side of her head is cropped. Othewise, your exposure is perfect, as is your color balance and her expression.

I disagree with the poster who thought the head should not be cropped. Including more of the head would weaken the image. At present there are two major areas - the white on the right, and the flesh tones on the left, separated by the black line of the veil. My eye nearly ignores the white area, traveling to the flesh and the fine detail of the veil. If the rest of the head were included, my eye would move on, to look at that area, of less visual interest. Thus the overall effect would be weakened.As it is, there's just enough veil at the left edge of the photo, especially including the fold that makes a dark line to the left (viewer's perspective) of the eye, to frame that side of the image and hold attention on the subject. Very nicely done.