donev1 689 Posted January 26, 2005 Please, excuse my learning stages. Next step for me is framing. Thanks for comments. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted January 26, 2005 well I can see where you were going with this. you tilted to effect a more dynamic composition, and I think you had good reason to try this here considering the character of the elements in this image. perhaps this sort of thing lends itself better if one applies some painterly effect or bending of colors. that is, generally speaking, you should try to take this technique a little further and see where it leads. Link to comment
mikeseb 0 Posted January 26, 2005 I am not normally moved by color landscapes, but this one is different. Somehow the slate grey of the clouds and the golden grass work well together. Critiques: 1. Agree with the other comment here that, unless this was on a hillside, it would work better with the horizon levelled. 2. If the work is good it can stand alone without "frames", fancy signatures, or other such adornment. I beg of you, don't succumb to that temptation. One of my pet peeeves! 3. the clouds just above the tree are burned out. I think more effective if some texture could be preserved here. this is an aesthetic decision, and perhaps you saw it another way. Good job overall--keep up the good work. Appreciate your feedback on my portfolio. mike sebastian Link to comment
donev1 689 Posted January 26, 2005 Thanks for all very useful advices. The photo is horizon levelled. This is seen on clouds. Link to comment
saro campione 0 Posted March 31, 2005 Evgeni, seems a painting, has seen your photos, a kind that appeals to a lot to me. Excuse the my English translate with google Link to comment
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