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well I can see where you were going with this. you tilted to effect a more dynamic composition, and I think you had good reason to try this here considering the character of the elements in this image. perhaps this sort of thing lends itself better if one applies some painterly effect or bending of colors. that is, generally speaking, you should try to take this technique a little further and see where it leads.
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I am not normally moved by color landscapes, but this one is different. Somehow the slate grey of the clouds and the golden grass work well together.

 

Critiques:

 

1. Agree with the other comment here that, unless this was on a hillside, it would work better with the horizon levelled.

 

2. If the work is good it can stand alone without "frames", fancy signatures, or other such adornment. I beg of you, don't succumb to that temptation. One of my pet peeeves!

 

3. the clouds just above the tree are burned out. I think more effective if some texture could be preserved here. this is an aesthetic decision, and perhaps you saw it another way.

 

Good job overall--keep up the good work.

 

Appreciate your feedback on my portfolio.

 

mike sebastian

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Evgeni, seems a painting, has seen your photos, a kind that appeals to a lot to me. Excuse the my English translate with google
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