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Let me know what you think, thanks.

I think you should have shown a little more of her jeans and her left arm. Lighting and contrast control is just fine, nice look of the model, nice background, nice colors. Looks pretty good!

Well, theo, the meeting of her shirt and jeans looks a little sloppy. I'd say either tuck in the shirt to create a clean line between shirt and jeans, or bring the shirt down over the top of her jeans to eliminate that bit o' midriff. Or, give us more belly! The off-center composition and background are well-chosen. 6/5

the softness and the lighting are wonderful - lovely lady and lovely portrait - 6/6

Thanks for the comments.

 

Hugo i've tried your suggestion, not sure about it.

 

Judson, you're right, but it is a portrait, not a fashion photo. I have to learn to look at things like that.

More belly sounds like a great idea! Next time. :)

 

Gerry, glad you like it. Your interest is much appreciated.

Very nicely done portrait! I am sure she will like it, as I do!

I like this one!!

Sarah thanks!

And you are right, she loved it, and so did I.

 

Jeff thank you very much.

A wonderful portrait ! 7/6

Excellent.greeting

Beautiful portrait!

This is lovely, Theo, and very natural.

Man you do these so well. And thanks I just noticed you were at my site today.