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Jennifer, cropped version


sjmurray

Lightly reworked. I think the image is stronger with a closer crop. This one's a little lighter too.


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Probably one of my last rolls of film before going "digital." Shot

with Tri-X and developed in a hand made developer using borax and

metol. Shot with a 105mm f 2.5 Nikkor and Nikon F.

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Wow. Beautiful. I can feel the presence of this beautiful girl in front of the camera. Obviusly they didn't like it because it not extra sharp and there is not too much contrast, but who cares?

Only thing I would give a little think is the crop, personally, if this were mine, I would have either included a little more of the neck or cropped just below the chin, maybe the latter.

Ciao

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Thank you for your kind comments. Lorenza: I agree, its cropped a little too close. I have the original "as shot" version in the same folder if you want to see it.
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