jerry ting 1 Posted January 18, 2005 What do you think about the composition and patterns of the water? Comments and suggestions welcome. Thanks! Link to comment
jimg 0 Posted January 18, 2005 I think a tighter focus on what you find important in this scene would help. There are a lot of shapes and lines to be taken in across the water. Taking in the whole scene on a small image is never the same as when you're witnessing it in person. Cropping or using a longer focal length to zoom in on what you feel is most intersting would help improve the impact of your photo. I only mention this given your comments about the shapes/lines in the water. As a whole it is a pleasant scene, but nothing that makes me go "wow". Link to comment
jerry ting 1 Posted January 18, 2005 Jim, thanks for the comments and the professional tips. I'll try to do it better next time. BTW, your portfolio is fabulous. Link to comment
takemyjazz 0 Posted January 18, 2005 I wish I could see some detail in the top trees but maybe that's not what you wanted. I like the toning of the picture. Thanks for sharing. 6/6 Link to comment
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