Darkes Marsh

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This is a nice photograph- good lines, textures, tones. But in my opinion, there is a little too much of the grass in the foreground. Perhaps try cropping out the bottom 10% or so.

I think the crop is fine, giving the photo good depth and composition.

Composition is fine. The height of the grass actually enhances the water's depth.

Hi Gerry, Good composition. I like the warm colors as contrast the cold hue of the water.well done .Happy new year,

Pnina

Thank you all for your comments. Have a great 2005!

Hey Gerry

I think this is a really good one. I like the colors of dried grasses and you have used it very well here. Textures stand out as well. The branches sticking out of the water are also eye catching!!

I like the heavy foreground, too - really adds depth. Nice lighting.

Love the composition !

Very nice Gerry...has a real mood to it.

Thank you all for your comments.

ah, I found the other version. Quite a difference from the tree'd version. The large rounded tree in the background was and is a good landmark.

 

I'm not so sure about the forground grasses here. The colors and the textures do draw the eye in and they are pleasant to look at but they take up close to if not 50% of the frame. The curve of the river does a nice job of bringing the eye to the mentioned tree.

 

I look forward to the other shots from this area.

 

Knicki