Arndt

Softbox behind, white plate in front.

 

comments and critiques are highly appreciated

very impressing. Strong expression is made by the lights and eyes. I like it

It seems like the focus is placed on the eye brows rather than on the eyes... would like to see more detail in the eyes since it appears they are the most important and attention-grabbing elements of the image. Also, the white plate is reflected in the eyes - in a perfect world, would like to see this distraction gone (unless of course it was your intent to include this reflection)... I wonder if a polariser could have helped with this... or perhaps just a slight adjustment in the placement of the plate?

 

As a whole, good shot. Regards,

I think I like the reflection of the white reflector in his eyes. It adds a surpernatural feel, like modern/sci-fi feel to the pic.

What I don't like is the focus on the eye the hairs between his eyes and the out-of-focus eyes. Also I'd try to rotate the picture slightly in PS to get the eye line horizontal which would add more impact to his look. Good tones and use of reflected light. Happy holidays! All the best.

If I was an actor, I would hire you to make a portrait like this for me... Thanks also for the technical details; Your light setup is wonderful. Regards, Alejandro