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The gausian blur you put in there is dizzying. I know this will sound harsh, but looking at it for too long gives me a headache....also, if this is fashion...why blur the clothes.

Apply the filter to center the view in the face. Here the version without filters:

The lighting looks a little harsh. But the moment is solid. Did you blur the lower half of the image?

Her makeup is in rose/berry tones, a bit on the glam side and is done with a deft hand. However, the casual clothes in brown and beige plaid do not match the tone or style of makeup. I have done makeup for years so that's usually the first thing I notice in a photo -- how the makeup is done.

 

She's very striking, and in my opinion you should shoot her in clothes that are more delicate and feminine, if you're going to do makeup like this. Either that, or you could do makeup that's more brown-based and earthy to match the clothes. However, I do not feel these clothes flatter her or do her any justice. Give her something better to wear!

The blur I applied it with Layer Mask:

The catwalk was about the fall-winter fashion, in addition formal clothes or to office; the colors that predominated: browns and ochers.

Thanks for your commentary.