Dinner at the take-out

Your comments and critiques are always welcomed. Thanks...Bill

I don't feel you are saying anything with this photo. MAybe a little less zoomed in and showing more of the window would have isolated more the two persons and convey a different feeling. Right now I'm just seing two persons eating.

I see a fellow who appears to show some interest in his dinner companion. I'd like to see a bit more contrast in this photo, possibly conversion to B&W, and a little darkening at the corners to direct our attention more to the couple.

Crop out the light-thingie en the bottom - i think that would be better.