Fresh On the Boat

I liked this picture in color, but I shot the next one in black and

white and thought it worked much better. Would appreciate any

comments!

B&W is nice, especially due to the white sail against the grey and black backdrop. It works well. Probably moving the boat slightly towards the right would give it a sense of motion than keeping right at the center. Anyway, nice shot.

The composition is much too centered, it looks too stiff, 5/6

Maybe it would be even better with a little more sky on top. The sky looks interesting (IMO), and it would move the horizon out of the middle.

i think it's beautifully simple