A Casual Tension

Please rate and critique my photo. Thank you.

Should be part of an iPod ad campaign.

Very sharp and simple.

 

I see nothing technically wrong, but there doesn't seem to be any "life" to the shot. It appears that you want to suggest someone wearing this, but to me, it appears to be a shirt laying on a table. If this were on a person there might be a bit more modeling of the person's shape in the tone and shadow. Maybe even the slightest hint of hair or skin at the edge of the frame would bring more drama to the concept.

Thank you all for your comments. Am not a professional photographer but this photo was proposed to be used in a recruitment ad for a government technology agency. Maury, you are right, I draped the jacket over an office chair propped up the ipod with a small pencil sharpener from inside the pocket. This was window lit.

Good still life photo. Take note of the dirty screen on your ipod though.