Sondre Lerche

Another shot from the same concert, I thought there was a totally

different feeling and atmosphere to this one than the other I

submitted. Hope you like it, if not, please give me some advice as

what to do differently.

zack, its okay, but i've got some issues with it. technically, the highlights on his face are a little blown out, taking away from the main subject. even with that taken care of, the red light is distracting, and i'm not sure about the blue line. i'd suggest cropping significantly tighter if you can control the highlights, but even then, his expression is just not that interesting. so as a photograph its fine, even if there's room for improvement (what photo posted here doesn't have room?); as a moment at a concert i think its less capable of being elevated very high. sorry, but that's my feedback.

The blue line and the exit sign are a bit distracting, and perhaps a closer crop would help that. There are some aesthetic elements that I think are wonderful though. The interplay between the blue and yellow light in the hair as it transitions between the two. Also, the folds in the shirt have a wonderful look of texture to them that looks cool with the different lights.

Great variety of colors in this one! I like the yellow and blue highlights in his hair. Nice work!