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Blurred Trees (revised)


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Nice photo, nice composition, good colors only for the white area in the sky... (but you already knew that...) Jiri
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Atle, I think you have burned too much the sky. The "white" is taking too many space. That creates a lot of contrast with the tree in the foreground. Best Regards
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Thanks for you honest opinion Julien.... yes i also think is too bright, and the darkest area on top, add to that even more. Regards!!
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Lol ....... for those of you who do not know - this tree appears so often in some of Atle's early work that I finally gave it a name - Bob ............ so funny, now we get to watch 'Bob' grow up, go to college, drop out, get a job, raise a family, have an affair (he has his eye on that little shrub down the hill there), get divorced, get layed-off, get re-married, and have grand children - sheesh !

 

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Beautiful scenery and nicely exposed. I agree about the burning but still the picture has a high aesthetic value....

Nice work.

 

Best regards.

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I think that the whiteness is OK, but the pink colours just over the mountain looks rather artificial. What did you do?

 

The composition is great, and the cropping works very very well. Keep it up! :)

 

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Hi Atle! Happy New Year to you also. Long time without participating heavily in PN myself. Glad to see you your lone trees!
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looking at your three latest uploads, I must say that your compositional style interests me. I must watch for your future uploads since I don't care to comment on a photo at the bottom of the critique comments heap.

 

cheers - HF

 

 

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Nice view, but you have lost a lot of texture of the leaf in the forehead! IMHO, I wish the trees to be more focus/sharper!

Thank you, Biliana

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Thx for honest critique billiana. and yes you are right.. there was strong wind, and combined with the late light and fujii velvia, i choosed to go for max blurring, to perhaps get an impression of the windy conditions..the exposure time was 7-8 seconds at f22. This also caused the strong witheness in the sky... wich bothers me way more. Regards!
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I'm bias towards square formats - full marks there:) The landscape setting is beautiful as all your scapes are. I'm not as bothered by the motion in the leaves as much as the over bright patch in the sky and my wish list would include not having that middle/little tree there.
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Thanks Audry. Would agree that the small tree somewhat blocks the fjord view, but impossible to avoid that if i want to have water in the frame. On the left side there is a big mast... very annoying, making it difficult move more to left. e.g. to make a photo of the mid and left tree. This location is easy acessable for me, and i use it as a "training ground"... so i will keep trying to improve theese shots. Regards!
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Thank you for the advice of the shaved one, and on the not this added gull if not that this one done with chamber(camera) in hand and in position of P and travelling when already us hibamos of the beach. Regards.
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